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i peer
at the crooked little teeth
behind the big ones
between wrinkles and weird maps
On your dark fair blue red skin
and i sleep so well.
I who have no god
am warmed
by the soft glow of your faith.
my father brother lover tormentor
my sin my fever my death my delight.
my shoelaces.
But
for you, a show
a hymn, a dress
cleansed of my blood.
for them, my bloodless virtue.
I shall dance to their song
I shall play the part.
I shall dance till my laces break.
i actually understood this one. heehaw.
PS: lose the @#!@*& word verfication
heehaw. that's a good sign (for me) :)
what word verification?
that's beautiful. shall now think of dancing every time i do up my shoelaces. not that often, but hey.
thanks bonny! yeh, ye could say my name is Fred...and start tappin awey :D
:) Nice Mimi
thanks dear bond, vagabond. and do update your blog...'least as often as i do! *heeheekoff* cant vait to read stuff from that hidden notepad oyers :P
Niceeeee. And you know what? You missed out a few kinky stuff that you can do with shoelaces ;)
And dont mind Mossy. People do weird things when they're drunk. While some people call up their ex or sing whenever they're drunk, intoxicated Mossy goes around telling every blogger to remove their word verification, regardless of whether they have it or not.
aah praps ye oughta give it another go..ye just might find it tween sin and death :D
i suggest ye go tie up mossy wif yo shoelaces. that'll keepim from ranting. bwaahaaah.
@kima: NOW i understand. musta been been *rather hard to type out the weird letter combinations, lmao.
i find myself coming back to this again and again.
"I who have no god
am warmed
by the soft glow of your faith."
"...for you...a dress
cleansed of my blood.
for them, my bloodless virtue."
"I shall dance till my laces break."
anii mong. like reader diges quotable quotes, mo?
khublei shibun mo bah! ka lawm lutuk!
This is brilliant. And you never shared this with me. ("My writings silly". Hah.)
The last two verses in particular. An mawi bawn bingbilet tawp tawp.
ka lawm e a u...bawn bingbilet tawp tawp! :)
So happy i got to read this one again. had been in my head since i first read it. i had always just remembered it as the shoelace poem. glad to know it's actually titled shoelaces.:)
Ka lo hual hmak hmak e, for publication :)
@bah sanga ~ yayy you remember!! tenkiu :)
@ddb ~ thank you!! this is great honour even to be in consideration of publication by one such as yourself. myself feeling v puffy chested and thumping fist on chest! :)